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So i’m making my first model from scratch (going to be Ruko Yokune!!) and this si what  have so far! I was wondering if I could have some good, hard, constructive critique on it, since you said you do more than just TDA. meanwhile, i’ll continue trudging along, trying to figure out how to export it from blender, because yes i am that inept. 

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hmm.. while i do like the face, i feel like a lot of improvements need to be made to the body especially the legs. the indent of the knees makes it look very tightly pinched and molded instead of… human-y.

the whole body in general just seems very slim from the side; id recommend thickening it just a little bit.

~mod iroha

MOD IROHA PUT THIS ON AS I WAS WRITING THIS LONG ASS RESPONSE GOD DAMN AAAAAAAUGHNEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

HERE’S WHAT I WROTE JHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

thank you for your submission! <3

im going to be honest- the body is far from great. from the front, it looks okay, but the way that the legs bend like that aren’t realistic at all. i understand if you’re trying to go for a stylistic approach, but even then you should pay attention to how bodies work. (i’m sorry, i’m realizing now that sounds really mean, but i’m bad at being blunt without sounding like an asshole)

it’s also very thin width-wise (from the side). back to the front of it, i think it looks good for the most part! the only thing i’d say to try to work on from the front view is the waist and upper arm. the upper arm is too thick compared to the forearm and the waist looks a bit too small to me.

god……….the face……. it makes me so happy jsdfhdgfdhggd

for your first face, it looks gorgeous!!!! it’s extremely stylized and you pull it off. i looked at your art (which i also like a lot) and i can tell that you definitely referenced your own style, which is good. the face looks amazing and you definitely have a lot of potential in that department! i can tell that soon you’re going to be a great modeler! i especially love the textures jdsjdsjjd there’s like nothing wrong with that face i love it so much,, i also love that it’s relatively low poly!! i’m a sucker for low poly models. also i don’t know if you meant to but it’s smart to keep the mouth open when you’re modelling a face, because it’s easier to make facials.

i’m sorry if my critique was too blunt!! you said to give you a hard critique dfdhfhgd,, as for exporting, i think this is the program that i use. if it’s not then just send us an ask off anon (so we know its you) and i’ll answer it privately with the right one (i have two but i always forget which one is the one that actually works)

hope i helped! this is the longest critique i’ve written i’m pretty sure

-mod cul

So i’m making my first model from scratch (going to be Ruko Yokune!!) and this si what  have so far! I was wondering if I could have some good, hard, constructive critique on it, since you said you do more than just TDA. meanwhile, i’ll continue trudging along, trying to figure out how to export it from blender, because yes i am that inept. 

hmm.. while i do like the face, i feel like a lot of improvements need to be made to the body especially the legs. the indent of the knees makes it look very tightly pinched and molded instead of… human-y.

the whole body in general just seems very slim from the side; id recommend thickening it just a little bit.

~mod iroha